Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Diamonds

Author's Note: This is just an experiment in poetry.

The whiteness of the earth,

Trapped in crystalline beauty,

Reflecting the light,

Never going dark,

Conveying a message to all,

There will always be hope,

As long as I stand,

As long as there is a world,

Hope shall exist

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3 comments:

  1. Matt LupoMarch 16, 2010 at 9:41 AM

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  2. Sammy MarzMarch 16, 2010 at 10:05 AM

    Hey your second romantic piece! That was cool how you compared diamonds with hope, and it flowed really well.

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  3. Alyssa MApril 16, 2010 at 10:16 AM

    Nice job! I agree with what Sammy said... (and Matt a little) it was really hopeful and had really cool metaphors in it

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