Samuel Johnson

Author's Note: This is my emulation of Samuel Johnson's "Evening Ode". 

Evening Ode- (Samuel Johnson's)

Evening now from purple wings 7
Sheds the grateful gifts she brings; 7
Brilliant drops bedeck the mead, 7
Cooling breezes shake the reed; 7
Shake the reed, and curl the stream 7
Silver'd o'er with Cynthia's beam; 8
Near the chequer'd, lonely grove, 7
Hears, and keeps thy secrets, love! 7
Stella, thither let us stray, 7
Lightly o'er the dewy way. 7
Phoebus drives his burning car, 8
Hence, my lovely Stella, far; 7
In his stead, the queen of night 7
Round us pours a lambent light:7
Light that seems but just to show 7
Breasts that beat, and cheeks that glow; 7
Let us now, in whisper'd joy,7
Evening's silent hours employ, 8
Silent best, and conscious shades, 7
Please the hearts that love invades, 7
Other pleasures give them pain, 7
Lovers all but love disdain. 7

Death- (My poem) This is an ironic poem that I wrote right away and now I hate it, but you can read it anyway. I will also post the beginning of my other poem that I really like so far. It's about trees and it really incorporates a lot of mythology. Please tell me how it's going!

Descends from Hell on dark wings
Eats the light darkness it brings;
Evil clings to it's red head,
Where it goes people fall dead;
Fall down dead, life flowing out
Rotten inside with Satan's drought;
Filled with fire hatred rings true,
Once was good but went askew,
Lucifer, leads into greed,
He will kill and make you bleed.
Brutus incased in his dark ice,
Hate, Satan's first friend, entice
On his shoulder, Judas waits,
There he stays tempting the fates:
Death swoops from the angered earth
 Destroying your lovely hearth;
Now fear death for it will come,
Do not drink from that tempting rum,
The day will fall night will rise,
Your body will feed the flies,
Life will end and end with death,
Fade it will, fade your last breath.

Trees- This is the good one that isn't finished.

Standing tall with bright green leaves
Drinking light that it receives;
Giving life to all the world,
Teaching man with leaves unfurled,
Leaves unfurled, and branches high,
Growing out beneath blue sky;
Bark that's strong like sword and shield,
Grows in stream and varied field,
Michael, grows the garden of God,
Strongly with a gentle prod.
Artemis roams in the trees,
Feeling that gentle lonely breeze;
Roots that hold back demon-kind,
Cages of roots intertwined:
Worlds upon lofty branches


     On the Death of Mr. Robert Levet,
    a Practiser in Physic, by Samuel Johnson.
    CONDEMN'D to Hope's delusive mine,

      As on we toil from day to day,

    By sudden blasts or slow decline

      Our social comforts drop away.


    Well tried through many a varying year,
             
      See Levet to the grave descend,

    Officious, innocent, sincere,

      Of every friendless name the friend.


    Yet still he fills affection's eye,

      Obscurely wise and coarsely kind;
      
    Nor, letter'd Arrogance, deny

      Thy praise to merit unrefined.


    When fainting nature call'd for aid,

      And hov'ring death prepared the blow,

    His vig'rous remedy display'd
      
      The power of art without the show.


    In Misery's darkest cavern known,

      His useful care was ever nigh,

    Where hopeless Anguish pour'd his groan,

      And lonely Want retired to die.

      
    No summons mock'd by chill delay,

      No petty gain disdained by pride;

    The modest wants of every day

      The toil of every day supplied.


    His virtues walk'd their narrow round,
      
      Nor made a pause, nor left a void;

    And sure th' Eternal Master found

      The single talent well employ'd.


    The busy day, the peaceful night,

      Unfelt, uncounted, glided by;
      
    His frame was firm—his powers were bright,

      Though now his eightieth year was nigh.


    Then with no fiery throbbing pain,

      No cold gradations of decay,

    Death broke at once the vital chain,
      
      And freed his soul the nearest way.

12 comments:

  1. I like how your poem first of all follows the style of Johnson, and then also takes advantage of classical symbolism from Dante. Take a look at what syllables are stressed in Johnson's poem. That adds to the sense of rhythm, and rhyme. Yours is quite different in that regard.

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  2. Your poem is really, really good. I agree with what Mr. J said about symbolism from Dante's Inferno- It made the poem really interesting to read and had a really good, kind of dark-themed flow to it. Everything just seemed to work in this! Awesome job, as always.

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  3. Your poem is really good! You really did a good job of follow the structure of the poem and also the style of the poet himself and like Mr. Johnson and Alaina said the symbolism was really cool in the poem. Good job!

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  4. You wrote both poems really well! I couldn't really tell the difference between the syllables in your poem and Samuel Johnson's poem, but sometimes the rhythm in some of your lines didn't flow. The first poem was so ironic! Both poems were really good and you should definitely finish writing the poem about trees. Good job! :)

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  5. Even though you do not think your first poem is good I actually liked that. Both are actually very good, but just complete opposites. The ironic one follows your poet more and the tree one is more of an opposite. You used symbolism much to your advantage in your poem(s). Good job!

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  6. I agree with Kelsey that some of the lines had a little bit of an off syllable count and that made the rhyme kind of awkward, but other than that I liked both poems. They both reflect not only Johnson but also your own sense of poetry.

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  7. Both of your parallel poems were great! I loved the first one because it was dark and spooky. I loved the second one because it was, well, pretty much the exact opposite of the first. Even though the opposites in content I couldn't tell the difference between them! Great job!

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  8. I think your use of closed form is especially fitting to your style as a writer, and to your style of humor. You have a talent for the rhythm and rhyme of this form, and could easily parlay it into satirical lyrics.

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  9. I do like your trees one better, but I think that your first one is okay too. I will comment on the tree one.

    I like how your poem flows really nice, but just because every two lines rhyme with each other, doesn't make it sing songy. Great imitation poem. I hope you finish it.

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  10. I agree with Abby. I like the second one better but the first one started out pretty well and got worse as it went on but I really think that your first one was a pretty good poem. I can't wait to see how your second one turns out and is it going to be another ironic mode. Great job.

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  11. I forgot to add this. I really like that you use closed forum. I think you are really good at closed forum. It seems like you portray your ideas very well in closed forum. Again, great job.

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  12. I agree with Chandler- your ideas seem to fit better into closed form. I know that you said that you didn't like the first one very much, but I actually really liked it. The ending of it was amazing! I loved it! And I also think that you should finish the trees one, because I like that one too. Nice job:)

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