Thursday, November 12, 2009
Bread Stream of Consciousness
Out of no where the marshmallow catches on fire. The flames gently lick around the edges and wherever it caresses the marshmallow turns black. The flames are gentle and kind, yet destructive. Within a matter of seconds the marshmallow falls to the ground and is completely devoured. I shrug away the joking comments of my family and grab another mallow. The process repeats again and again, just like life.
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Just wondering, do marshmallows remingd you of bread?
ReplyDeleteI don't get how this has anything to do with bread, but I really enjoyed this. Your vocabulary usage was really good! :)
ReplyDeleteThat really has nothing to do with bread, maybe like a campfire or something, but it was cool and well written
ReplyDeletehow do marsh mallows and bread go together
ReplyDeleteDerek, you might want to change the title of your post. But besides the title, I really like the adverbs and action words you used in your post. It made me feel like I was actually there, and my mouth was watering. Good job!
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