Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Someone please tell me I'm not crazy! Or really angry.

I stand alone among the raging torrent. On a rock in the middle of the white water rapids. The roaring of the river fills my ears. I taste the spray, it's icy cold and tastes of freedom. Mountain peaks fill the sky in the distance, just as trees line the bank. I stay on my rock alone against the world. I feel warm though the water is freezing. This is home.

3 comments:

  1. My journal entries are like that too.

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  2. Nice title. I really like it. It is shocking to get to the end and read "This is home."

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  3. I like it a lot, Derek. It made me really thirsty, and I felt like I was on top of that mountain peak. Nice job.

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